Talk:Zaalbar Tokocharger/@comment-24302234-20140213134839

Hey guys, please tell me if my stories are making any sense, going to quick or somthing. when i write at night, i might leave it in the middle of a sentence, then in the morning time as gon soo quick in the story. you know, it feels like it was a long time since you wrote that part, but only been one night. this probobly makes no sense either XD, but please inform me if my stories have some sort of flaw, thank you