Talk:Bala hunter/@comment-4593738-20131031211946

Indubitable page Ensign. Though you've recieved a number of comments about the apparent disorganisation of your page, it is slightly exaggerated, you're good with writing.

If i may, a few tips. Plan out your categories and sub-categories. This will help you to better organise and display your Story and page. Utilise everything the editor presents. This will help you make it look asthetically pleasing and not make people gloss over the writing. And finally, Grammar and spelling, as with writing a personal statement and Curriculum Vitae, make sure you have properly spelt and layed out your page, if it has spelling mistakes it will cause people to spend time correcting it or figuring out what you were trying to spell, and if it isn't Gramatically correct it may confuse people and they could lose interest entirely.

As i said, indubitable work. Hope to see more added to it soon.

- Crow Shadowhawk