User:KaharZamet/Sandbox

Welcome to my Jedi Lab... :)  Kahar Zamet - "I'm one of the best Jedi Masters you'll find in the galaxy." 22:55, January 28, 2013 (UTC)


 * *POSSIBLE* = A story idea that may be implemented into the final story, but not confirmed.
 * (SCENE FROM THE STORY) = exact scene that will be in final story

Brainstorm Story Ideas

 * Battle of Felucia (20 BBY)


 * Battle on Coruscant (44 ABY)


 * Vengeance of Varan's Battalion (45 ABY) CHANGED TO "Battle on Coruscant"
 * Payback of the Separatists

Other Ideas

 * Wookiee Hunter Snorri (The False Mandalore Story)

Super's Rough Draft Polish
Shortly after the end of the Battle of Ryloth, the same Jedi Knight who had assisted Anakin Skywalker in stopping a Hyena Bomber attack had been informed by Republic Intelligence Troopers that Asajj Ventress had been spotted on Ryloth. Ordered by the only Clone General, Cards, the Jedi was to track her down, being suggested to talk with Cham Syndulla who was just recovering from battle when leading his Twi'lek Freedom Fighters during the Battle of Ryloth. The Jedi had immediately attempted to discuss with Cham Syndulla, taking the suggestions of Republic Intelligence. However, Cham refused to co-operate with the Jedi Repersentative. The Jedi challenged Cham to a game of Card Commander, demanding that if he won, Cham must give him the information he wanted to acquire. Cham and the Jedi played the game, resulting in the Jedi's triumph, forcing Cham to give out the information to the Jedi. Cham informed the Jedi that he had spotted Ventress boarding a ship with the Trandoshan Junk Dealer, heading for Tatooine.

The Jedi, in response, flies his Red Jedi Starfighter stubbed as "Default" and flies to Tatooine, preparing his scanners to track Gha Nackts' Junk Freighter. The Jedi arrives at Tatooine and his scanners pick up Gha Nackts' Junk Frigrate. The Jedi lands on an spaceport platform, heading inside the Cantina in which Gha Nackt is spotted. The Jedi confronts Gha Nackt, trying to elude him into informing the Jedi of any valubale information. Gha Nackt, tired of the constant bickering with the Jedi, challenges him to a game of Card Commander, debuting that if the Trandoshan failed to win he would have to reveal his information. Again, the Jedi remained victorious against his enemy who had now revealed his information on Asajj Ventress.

Superdadsuper (talk) 00:30, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Notes for Battle on Coruscant (44 ABY)

 * Varan's male apprentice breaks free from a Republic Prison and vows to wreak havoc in the name of his deceased master
 * The apprentice frees his Bounty Hunter brother, (unknown), from prison


 * Varan's apprentice and the apprentice's brother go to Korriban and unite Varan's Fleet and Battalion to wreak havoc on the galaxy


 * The apprentice, Bounty Hunter, and Varan's Forces go to Coruscant in which a great battle happens
 * (SCENE FROM THE STORY) Kahar and Jason landed their airspeeder outside the evacuated hospital where Dalan was. A Force Bomb was to be set off, using Dalan's Force Energy as the power feed. "10 minutes," the computer said. Kahar and Jason walked to the entrance, lightsabers ready. The Bounty Hunter stepped out and began firing at them. They activated their lightsabers. "I'll hold him off!" Jason shouted. Kahar nodded as he ran past the Bounty Hunter and up several stairs. He got to the top. He saw Dalan in the chair. "5 seconds." Kahar quickly dove at Dalan, cut the tubes, and pushed him out the window. "Activation cancelled." Kahar then used the force to burn the bomb into thin air. Dalan shrugged. "Good thing we have a spare," he said. Dalan pressed a remote and a bomb went off in the hospital. Kahar watched as pieces went flying through the air. Luckily, the district was only made of abandoned warehouses, so nobody was injured or killed. Kahar pushed himself away from Dalan. Dalan went flying away into a rain of pieces. Kahar watched him until he saw him no more. Kahar glided through the air, then hit the side of a piece of metal. He began gliding downwards more and grabbed onto a piece. He got onto it. Then he remembered something.... "Jason!" he shouted. Jason had been at the hospital when the bomb went off. He began riding the piece of metal downwards. It was so fast it caught on fire. He quickly started flying at an angle so it would crash harmlessly into an abandoned warehouse nearby. As he got near to the hospital, he jumped and safely landed. The metal crashed into an abandoned warehouse and exploded. Kahar ran towards the entrance. "Jason!" he shouted. He couldn't find Jason. Kahar saw the Bounty Hunter dead, crushed under a large piece of metal. "M--master," he heard a faint voice say a little bit to his left. He look over and saw Jason, all beat up, next to a pile of rubble. Kahar helped Jason up. He then escorted him to the airspeeder. Surprisingly, it still worked, but was dented. "We gotta leave now, the ground will collapse any moment from the pressure of the bomb and falling of the hospital," Kahar said. Suddenly parts of the ground began to collapse down into the district. "Right as I say that..." Kahar quickly started the airspeeder and took off, right as the piece of ground they had been stationed on fell behind them. The ground continued crumbling. Then the hospital fell into an abandoned warehouse in the district and there was a large explosion. The ground kept falling until there was none left. Kahar drove to the Jedi Temple and landed. Republic Medics took Jason to the Medical Station. "And that leaves only you..." a female voice said from behind him. Kahar recognized it. He turned around. The figure was hooded. "You read my--" The figure pushed back her hood before Kahar finished his sentence. It was Togruta Jedi Master Thalia Larosa, a good friend of Kahar's. "mind," Kahar said, finishing his sentence. "Think you could lend me a hand, Thalia?" Thalia nodded. "I think so," she replied. They walked to Kahar's airspeeder and took off. "Well I stopped Dalan's Force Bomb, but he had a Thermal Bomb set up. That hospital in the Abandoned District is now gone. That's how Jason got injured, too." Thalia nodded. "And what about Dalan?" Kahar looked at Thalia. "That blasted coward escaped," he replied. Kahar continued flying. His communicator buzzed. He activated it. "Yes?" Kahar asked. It was a Republic Commander. "Dalan Serenti and his forces are attacking our location! I'll send you the coordinates!" the Commander shouted as he shot an Imperial Soldier in the chest. Kahar looked at the coordinates and quickly flew there.
 * The apprentice will be identified as Dalan Serenti at one point in the story

Notes for Payback of the Separatists

 * Kahar escorts Ambassador (unknown) to Naboo
 * A Separatist Attack Cruiser grabs the Ambassador Ship with a large, metal claw while in space


 * IG-211 and his droids board the Ambassador Ship, trying to capture the Ambassador


 * IG-211 and Kahar duel on-board the ship


 * IG-211 wounds the Ambassador, knocks her out, and captures her


 * A prisoner exchange happens: The Republic gives Silk Mar to the Separatists, the Separatists give the Ambassador to the Republic
 * (SCENE FROM THE STORY) IG-211 stormed on the ship and glanced around. His two commando droid companions followed behind, now noticing a group of five clone troopers who opened fired. Killer walked along, allowing the laser fire to pass him as he strolled along with ease. He attacked the first trooper with his electrostaff, and the commando droids fired at the other two, while Killer handled the rest. IG-211 stomped his metal foot on the head of the clone to make him stop squealing from the pain. "Find the Ambassador. We want her alive," he said to the commando droids. PDP-15's voice came on his comlink and Killer ordered, "Where is the ambassador currently at?" PDP-15 looked at the heat seeking monitors. "It is complicated to tell sir. It seems she may be residing on the top of the ship, in the luxury suite, but there is a larger group in the hangar." Killer responded back to his tactical droid, "Then I will leave it to the commando droids to go to the suite.  The group in the hangar may be of trouble when we try to make an escape." Meanwhile, Kahar and his men fought off droids in the hangar. IG-211 arrived. He bashed any being in his way, including his own battle droids. He spotted Kahar and activated his stolen lightsaber and pulled out his electrostaff. Dual wielding a stolen lightsaber and electrostaff, the magnaguard charged at Kahar. Kahar readied his lightsabers and blocked.
 * Ambassador Ship is as large as a Republic Cruiser, but does not have as many offense or defense systems and more luxurious