Talk:Commander Calins1Warrior/@comment-5323879-20121002181554

'''Calins and Sarria '''

At one point is his life when Calins was 10 years old, at least from how he looked from the speeding bacta tanks and from that he was a clone commando cadet, he was visiting the planets to gather information on some of the tech for ships and other planetary technology, and the species that used them. Calins was now on a trip to the far away planet Zeno to do research there now, and on one day as he was doing some small research a small Zenolian girl walked up to him, she was about the age of a 9 year old girl, and her name was Sarria Ion. Sarria at that time was in her Twi’lek form from being a little shy. Calins during his time on Zeno had a lot of fun and cool adventures with Sarria during the time he could have some fun. About after 2 years had passed Calins had finished his research and had orders to go to report the information back to his commanding officer, as much as he did not want to leave he did but before he did he told Sarria that one day they will see each other again. But a few years passed and the clone wars began, and he was now 21 years old and now a fully trained Clone Commando. During the battle for Kashyyyk, Calins found Sarria knocked out in a highly armored jail cell during a raid his squad was to do to rescue captive troopers and others from the droid army. When Calins found Sarria he at first did not think it was her put he paused for a sec and remembered the times he had with her. He then blasted the lock on the cell and ran to Sarria to see if she was ok, she then woke up and she and the rest of Calins and Sarria troopers then escaped in the night to a clone outpost on the planet. During the time they were together again on Kashyyyk they both began to feel closer together, and after one of the great battles on the planet was over and they took out a droid base they then had to leave the planet to help in other parts but during some times Calins was able to visit Sarria on Zeno. On one visit they secretly married, even though they never that clones were not to get married to keep them focused on their duties for the Republic. Very few know of this other then Sarria and Calins, like Sarria father Ren Ion.

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