Talk:Mirta Brokar/@comment-5287520-20130925155909

A wonderful story you have here. Now I understand the hate for Death Watch. I fixed some minor typos. Please don't kill me. :P Just some names not Capitalized. I don't know if this is a Mando word that Hettir said or it's a dragon roar. "After hearing a loud roa,r Mirta ran in to find Hettir at the mercy of a" It's in the child of Death Watch section.