Talk:Kahar Zamet/@comment-5207382-20151226163443/@comment-4841625-20151228202835

Thorun brings up an interesting point: You could do a lot more with the immortality factor that you've written in. It just feels like you only made your character immortal so you could write stories set in all various star wars eras, instead of actually utilizing it as a storytelling mechanic.

Immortality isn't living forever, it's watching everyone else die. I think if you had used that, you could have made a really good and compelling story arc, as well as giving your protagonist some character development (Heck, some characterization in general).