Talk:Commander Cobra/@comment-4581966-20111108182748

Nice story! I have a few things though... You kind of go back and forth between 1st and 3rd person writing during the article. Most people write in 3rd person form(it makes for a better wiki article) so, it would probably be a good idea to go back and change your 1st person parts to 3rd person. Also, is this second campaign of Ryloth something you made up yourself?