Thread:DarthJaciuss/@comment-5970523-20120617002421

Not bad for a start, Buddy. I will point out a few things that you can change if you want. I know what I am saying sounds harsh, but I am trying to help you out here.

Post-Geonosis, you are fine as far as I can see, but during your training part:

 ·           On Kamino, around 144 Alpha ARC Troopers were created including Alpha-17 Alpha and others.

 ·           The Alpha ARC Troopers are very different from other clones, according to canon at least. They are extremely independent like Jango Fett, and dependable, though they do question their jedi generals’ orders when the orders they are given contradict their tactical training and beliefs. Btw, true the Alpha ARC’s can think for themselves, but barely any of them were thought of to be terminated by the Kaminoans. This is true for the Null ARC Troopers though, (around 11 of them that serve Kal Skirata). They were deemed as unable to be commanded and did not follow orders from the jedi or anyon else except Kal.

 ·           The Alpha ARC’s were kept on a classified sector of Tipoca City and were kept top secret until the battle of Kamino in 21.83 BBY, which you can research on Wookiepedia, because they were the elite.

 ·           If you read my page, Ember was part of Gamma Squad, but its fine if you changed it up on your page.

Lastly, most Kaminoans did not really care about clones like the jedi did. They regarded them more as products for economic purposes. This was one reason why they wanted to terminate the Null Arc troopers because they would not please their clients (the jedi/Republic). They did not think of the Nulls then as innocent children. They were happy with their clones when the troopers were just the automatons that followed orders. This was a sign that their cloning was successful  