Talk:Commander Spike/@comment-4769961-20120616133512/@comment-1379990-20120616163752

Just a few ideas. Start with a back story family history or something. Write about how he got in the war. What he struggled with, what his glorious moments were. But don't do it over the top. A flawed here is a more interesting one. One who is perfect, there's no challenge for him, which is why invincible or near-invincible characters are never that interesting.

Look up the hero's journey which will tell you about the call, passing the threshold and other points the hero goes through.