User:-Price-/To do

Page plans:

Early Days:

 * Flesh out early days, make it more coherent

Corruption:

 * Same as above
 * Backstory for Ranulph, potentially make him a different character altogether to make the story a little less random (This Ranulph will now be referred to as Ranulph 1)
 * Just generally polish the section, it's pretty plot-important
 * Ganner vs Ranulph 1: Make duel make sense, remove the whole "loses an eye thing"

The (Personal) Dark Times:

 * Will be expanded upon in Exile

A Bunch of Umbara Happens:

 * Change title
 * flesh out story
 * Antimatter Squadron (Ganner should actually know them)
 * More backstory and introduction for Hans

Umbara's Secrets:

 * Title change (What secrets?)
 * General polish

Revelations:

 * Not a ton, polish

A Daring Escape:

 * Polish, make Ranulph 2 make more sense (even if it has to be different than the Ranulph previously established)

Felucia:

 * Ganner is no longer part of the Jedi, make story about him getting distress message from Hans and saving him

Story of Darth Maricus:

 * Polish
 * Make it line up better with Revelations and Truth

Antimatter Squadron:

 * Previously mentioned backstory changes
 * Less insane tri-fighter sequence, something more believable if possible
 * Polish

Greatest Hero:

 * Polish
 * Potential expansion

Return to the Temple:
===The Reverence: (If Return is kept in story)===
 * Move or replace with something else entirely
 * Lots of polish required
 * General polish, this is a decent section
 * Make some fixes so that Dylan makes sense

(If not kept in story)
(At the moment I am leaning towards taking Return out)
 * Provide some logical explanation as to how Ganner gets on the Reverence (Anyone up for a "trapped on a starship in space with a pyschopath murderer" story?)
 * Rewrite some stuff and polish
 * Make Dylan make more sense

The Only Lead:

 * Make Dylan make more sense (only a little he keeps it funny as the story slowly gets darker)

Mandalore:

 * For God's sakes, if it's possible, do something about the "Chat log"

Eye of the Storm:

 * Wait... Talzin isn't there (get rid of Talzin)

Eclipse:

 * Really not a lot to do here, is there?

Truth:
There really shouldn't be any revisions past this point.
 * Check for consistency

Exile:
Ganner's redemption on Dantooine

Silver Knight:
Order 66, battle against War Eagle/Brotherood, Ranulph rescue mission all in one