Talk:Tahiri Adeptsword (Tahiri Windu)/@comment-24633208-20140502145258/@comment-24772924-20140503180438

Yes, I must say this page is not at all a help to what is known as Star Wars. I read through this and although the storyline is good and the character build is nice, the page does need a lot of touching up. Compare this to Shakespeare and this is not close to anything poetic. (That's what I feel)