Talk:Commander JaCorrey Sheppard/@comment-4935956-20150527000302/@comment-4617047-20150527003408

I can cour. This is pretty graphic and a little unpleasant, whether it was intended on purpose or just by preference. Kahar is right, I would advise that it be re-written to be more pleasant, and asking wikia members for permission to use their characters (As I asume Jaciuss in the story was referring to me).