Talk:Arran Slarglide/@comment-17229870-20140503221243

Hey, a really great way of getting a reader hooked, is adding details to certain moments. And the best details-in my opinion-are during combat bc they give the reader a sense of understanding of what it looks like, feels, and hears like.

In Star Wars, it is difficult bc of its different technologies and what not, but to really understand that is by reading books that refer to them. I suggest Karen Travis' republic commando series, which talks about a squad of republic commandos during the clone wars. They are Omega Squad.

If your a fan if reading those military books then you might like this one. (You could get it off the iPad btw.)