Talk:Kol Kerz-Tak/@comment-1379990-20120215023152

Hey great page, haven't read it all (read part during editing, takes quite a while). Some advice though. Try and see if you can find a spellcheck on your browser, or type it in Mircosoft Word first, which should have a spellcheck. Also check if you can make the story more realistic and not going too wild with powers gained. You can still destroy armies, with just a little more effort, rather than just one force push, to compair. If you get what I mean. Last try to make it closer to the actual canon. Keep Savage's death a mystery. You can still hummiliate them, if you don't like their characters.