Talk:Kar'ta Kryze/@comment-5599546-20140422142219/@comment-5599546-20140423001635

Dull? having imagination is good, just look at my new fanon story that follows canon. I hope you'll like it. If you find it dull, just say it in the comment, but keep in mind however, that your story is not that good. Most part involves going to meetings and people get captured. You don't even explain the details of a small fight. You rushed passed them by saying "And Holly defeated them all" you should have said like "Holly raised her blaster, shot the left droid. Then spun around and shot the other in the head" that would be cooler. Just an advice, don't take it too seriously XD