Talk:Adni Ors/@comment-5952242-20130707013616

Ok, my opinion, it is a pretty good page, except there are a ton of grammar and spelling errors, and it needs to be cleaned up and put in better order.

Plus, you named Commander Jet Jets. His name is Jet, not Jets. I would understand if it was a non-canon character, but the desert picture is actually a picture of Commander Jet.

I also have read some of the earlier comments, and if you are a Togrutan/Zenolian, why are the pictures a green Twi'lek? I just don't understand.Twi'lek, Zenolian, Togrutan? Who knows? Only you and God.

And you need to make it longer. I can't STAND short stories. They irritate me. T_T

O_O Anyways, nice page. I hope you add more. I also love your name. So creative. So, long story, short, nice page.

~Clone Niceshot, prodigy son of Blaster Niceshot

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