Talk:Tahiri Adeptsword (Tahiri Windu)/@comment-5599546-20140504002312

This fanon story is nothing close to poetic licence. This is not even close to poetic. You did not improve "Star Wars" at all. If you call this "improving" Star Wars, then you seriously don't know anything. If I would improve Star Wars I would... And the above are how this fanon story is NOT a poetic licence, but quite the opposite.
 * Marry someone else because marrying Mace Windu makes the story barely tolerable. Mace is a vigilant Jedi. He follows the Jedi Code strictly. Mace would never bring himself down to love another Jedi.
 * Too much skirmishes with Ventress and Grievous, I know this is during the Clone Wars, but there are other villains out there.
 * If this is really poetic licence, then there would never be a "Golden Age" of the Republic. The Sith Order, under the line of Darth Bane and the calculations of Darth Sidious, will never be truly defeated. They will disguise and hide themselves among the faithful. Ever heard of a Jedi Consular storyline, Master Syo Bakarn, and the Sith Emperor's children?
 * Lastly, no Jedi wear pink clothing! Jedi only wear simple colored robes like brown, tan, cream-colored, or white. Your Jedi may wear the ugly pink clothing to stand out among others, but it also shows that you are a rule-breaker, and the Order needs not someone who lowers the moral quality of one of their Council Members.
 * Mace Windu is NOT Mace Windu. You may use his picture, but the characteristics of the Mace Windu in your story made me wonder if he was captured by an imposter and the Windu you are marrying is a separatist spy. Mace does what is right for the whole Jedi Order. Having emotional attachments with a mere Twi'lek is something the real Mace Windu will never do.