Talk:Talanna Clara-Talon/@comment-5599546-20140425011315/@comment-5599546-20140428084354

Your greatest flaw, Holly, is not making sense. Now, imagination and sense can co-exist together peacefully, but you refuse to acknowledge it. That's why you and your friends story seem too much like a Ben 10 or Scooby Doo cartoon, and not like Star Wars.